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Born to Run

Posted by Tracy Poff on February 17, 2014

Born to Run by Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon was published in 1992.

Born to Run is urban fantasy. The premise is that elves and banshees and various creatures and circumstances of the Irish and Scottish mythology are real. The good elves are relatively well-disposed toward humans, and will generally help people, and the bad ones hate humans and will try to do them harm. The modernization of this basic story is that the good elves, led by Keighvin Silverhair, are building racecars in order to get money to help children, since in the modern world magically-created gold isn’t so useful, while the bad elves (and other creatures of the Unseleighe Court) are running a business creating kiddie porn and snuff films, enjoying both the monetary profit and the negative emotions.

The story plays out in the lives of the elves of Elfhame Fairgrove, the human mage Tannim, the retired metallurgist Sam Kelly, and the teenage runaway and prostitute Tania.

I like this modernization of the mythology. It serves as a great basis for the story, and it’s an interesting enough setting to hold the reader’s attention.

Unfortunately, the writing wasn’t so good. It was very heavy-handed. I’d even call it amateurish, in many ways. The foreshadowing is obvious enough that they might as well have just said “check back in a hundred pages when this plot thread ties into the others”.

In particular, it was totally obvious from the beginning that Ross would be helping out in the climax (“You need me, you call.”), that Tania would be rescued by Tannim (“She had vague memories of a dream, where Tannim was some kind of warrior, in leather and blue jeans, and he fought monsters to protect her. . . .”), that the bad guys who make kiddie porn would use Tania in their plot against the good guys… and so on. It would have been far more surprising if those things hadn’t happened. Even the character of Skippy-Rob was pretty obviously set up as someone we should miss when he died–someone to die to show us how serious things are.

Besides the plot-related issues, the book feels very like reading fanfiction–regular references to popular culture and scifi/fantasy literature. As for the former, being published in 1992, it’s very firmly set in a late-eighties/early-nineties cultural milieu, which is probably a little more jarring now than it was twenty years ago. As for the latter, the only other book I can think of that made quite so many scifi references was Inferno by Niven and Pournelle, but it had a pretty good reason for it. Born to Run also ignores the Law of Conservation of Detail at odd moments, devoting, for example, two large paragraphs to describing Tannim’s bed. Those kinds of things can add character to a work, when done well, but they just felt out of place here.

The heavy-handedness I mentioned comes through not just in the foreshadowing, but in the moralizing the book engages in. The most substantial theme of the book is that there are children in very bad circumstances, forced to live as no child should, and that this is a real problem. True and important. But they try too hard, I think, to convince us. A relevant quotation:

Sam nodded, but he had reservations. Not that he hadn’t heard about all the supposed abused kids, on everything from Oprah to prime-time TV dramas, but he wasn’t sure he believed the stories. Kids made things up, when they thought they were in for deserved punishment. Hell, one of the young guys at work had shown up with a story about his kid getting into something he was told to leave alone in a store, breaking it, then launching into screams of “don’t beat me, Mommy!” when the mother descended like a fury. Embarrassed the blazes out of her, especially since the worst she’d ever delivered in the kid’s life was a couple of smacks on the bottom. Turned out the brat had seen a dramatized crime-recreation show the night before, with an abused-kid episode. Sam was beginning to think that a lot of those “beaten kids” had seen similar shows, then had been coached by attorneys, “child advocates,” or the “non-abusing spouse.” Wasn’t that how the Salem witch-trials had happened, anyway? A bunch of kids getting back at the adults they didn’t like?

Sam, being one of the good guys, comes around pretty quickly (he decides that elves are probably pretty hard to trick). I recognize that the authors are intentionally trying to head off the kinds of arguments people make in the real world, by having them countered in the story, but it still feels clumsy. And it’s far from the only time in the novel when there’s a scene that is almost certainly only present to counter some misconception that the readers may have.

I’ve said a lot of bad things about this book, but that doesn’t mean I didn’t like it. I’ll probably read the others in the series, some time, and I’d even recommend the book–if you think it sounds interesting, you’ll probably not be disappointed if you read it. Just don’t expect a masterpiece. The plot is engaging enough, and it’s not hard to care about what happens to the characters, particularly in Tania’s segments.

I enjoyed Lackey’s Valdemar series much more, but this book is a pretty solid 3/5, in my opinion. It used to be in the Baen Free Library, but it doesn’t seem to be, anymore, so if you’d like to read it, you’ll have to pick up a copy elsewhere.

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When the Clock Struck Thirteen

Posted by Tracy Poff on August 30, 2011

Every day, every hour, the iron boy struck the bell with his silver hammer. At one o’clock, he struck it once, at two o’clock, he struck it twice, and so on. One night, though, at midnight, he struck the bell thirteen times. And suddenly, he was free. He wanted to be alive, so the magician who owned the house with the bell, where he’d stood for so many years, sent him to the Country of Zorn, in which he could find the Silver River. If he bathed in the Silver River, he would become alive.

When the Clock Struck Thirteen by Sheila McCullagh is a children’s picture book, designed to teach young children to read. On the left-hand pages are longer sentences with more complicated words, intended for parents to read, while the right-hand pages contain shorter, simpler sentences, intended for children to read. Eventually, the children can be expected to read the entire book, themselves.

The idea of a book that is designed to be read collaboratively by parent and child seems like a good one, to me, and this book seems a good example of it. The part of the story on the left-hand pages is just a bit more difficult to read than the part on the right hand pages, providing a gentle step up in difficulty for children learning to read.

The story is continued and concluded in the remaining four book in Stage 4 of the Puddle Lane reading program, which, sadly, I do not own. The story in this one is quite incomplete, ending just as the boy leaves the magician for the Country of Zorn. Perhaps I’ll acquire the others someday, so I can see how it ends.

I’d recommend When the Clock Struck Thirteen to parents looking for something to read with their children, and if this book is any indication of the quality of the other books in the series, then they would be well worth acquiring, as well.

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Return to Exile

Posted by Tracy Poff on August 28, 2011

All Sky’s life, his family has been moving from place to place, never staying long enough for him to make real friends. So, his best friend is his monocle-wearing uncle Phineas, who has taught him to solve puzzles and set and elude traps, and attempted to teach him botany. He has also taught Sky more esoteric knowledge–of monsters, and how to hunt or avoid them.

Sky’s parents have always insisted that monsters aren’t real. Now that they are moving back to Exile, where his parents lived before he was born, Sky will discover just how real monsters are, and some secrets about himself, as well. Pity that the worst monster of all the Arkhon, will be released on the world in just three days, unless Sky can find a way to stop it.

Return to Exile by E. J. Patten is a middle-grade fantasy novel, the first book in The Hunter Chronicles. It’s filled with fantastical monsters and exciting adventure, and characters with plenty of secrets of their own. With his uncle missing, Sky must decide who to trust and solve the riddles his uncle left for him, if he’s to find Phineas and prevent the Arkhon from escaping its prison.

Patten is a bit wordy, initially. The first few chapters read like he was trying a bit too hard to make an impression, rendering the first few dozen pages something of a chore. Once the story picks up, though, you’ll find it hard to put the book down. There are mysteries and problems to solve right up until the end, and there’s always enough going on to keep you interested.

The world of Return to Exile is very well-realized, with a variety of monsters, plants (some monstrous), and monster hunters, forming a coherent world and history. If anything, Patten has created a world that’s too interesting–I found myself wishing that I could read some of the in-universe books like The Evil Echo of Solomon Rose, so as to learn more about the history of the world. Hopefully, we can look forward to more details in future entries in the series.

Return to Exile is a great middle-grade fantasy book. It goes on sale September 6, 2011 in both hardcover and electronic formats.

Disclosure: This review is based on a free advance reader’s copy.

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